Society’s rules is a part of world building that often does not get enough attention. This is part 3 of a six-part world building series.
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77 Caste System Examples (2023) – Helpful Professor
Elumis – What Are Basic Human Rights?
Sanderson’s Three Laws of Magic: Worldbuilding Advice for Game Masters
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Hey Writing Pursuits Authors. Welcome back
Kathrese McKee:to the podcast. If you're new around here, my name is Kathrese
Kathrese McKee:McKee. And I'm glad you're here. Today we're going to continue
Kathrese McKee:our world building series. This is the third part of a six part
Kathrese McKee:series on world building. And it is called society's rules: bend
Kathrese McKee:them, break.them.
Kathrese McKee:In our world building series, we're considering the ways world
Kathrese McKee:building can act as a source for thing, plot point. And best of
Kathrese McKee:all, conflict. This is part three of the series. And I think
Kathrese McKee:it's the most important piece of world building. When we think of
Kathrese McKee:world building, we tend to think of the physical aspects of the
Kathrese McKee:world, you know, the environment, or the technology
Kathrese McKee:or, like I said, the physical aspects, the buildings, and so
Kathrese McKee:forth. We don't think of society's rules as much as we
Kathrese McKee:ought to. But I think this is a treasure trove of conflict
Kathrese McKee:ideas, and plot points and themes. So of all the pieces, I
Kathrese McKee:think this is the part you need to think about the very most and
Kathrese McKee:perhaps first, we have already been through building believable
Kathrese McKee:worlds and why it matters. We've also covered nature's realm set
Kathrese McKee:the stage today is society's rules been then break them. And
Kathrese McKee:then we will follow that up with rules of progress shape, their
Kathrese McKee:shape your world past and present, where we explore
Kathrese McKee:history's legacy. And finally, magic myth and man wield the
Kathrese McKee:supernatural power. I'm looking forward to that one. Today. In
Kathrese McKee:part three, we will cover these important considerations social
Kathrese McKee:class, cultural norms, form of government, distribution of
Kathrese McKee:wealth, prevailing religion, moral codes, rights and
Kathrese McKee:responsibilities and laws of magic. And if that seems like a
Kathrese McKee:lot, it is, this is a complex topic, I'm going to try to break
Kathrese McKee:it down and make it visible to you so that you can kind of go
Kathrese McKee:back through and find the chapter that you're wanting to
Kathrese McKee:talk about and delve down into that. So hopefully, that will be
Kathrese McKee:helpful. The first thing we're going to discuss is social
Kathrese McKee:class, I will switch back and forth between my mind map I have
Kathrese McKee:an Obsidian and this Canva presentation. So let's go to
Kathrese McKee:Obsidian right now. Okay, when you think about social class,
Kathrese McKee:your main question is how does society measure individual
Kathrese McKee:worth. And traditionally, we are have these three systems in
Kathrese McKee:play, sometimes they coexist. And other times they're very
Kathrese McKee:much dependent on where you're talking about hierarchy, equal
Kathrese McKee:Attarian societies, egalitarian societies, and a caste system.
Kathrese McKee:So some examples of hierarchy that are very clear are the
Kathrese McKee:military business, you have org charts there, there's always
Kathrese McKee:someone at the top political systems the same and churches,
Kathrese McKee:almost every religious organization has some form of
Kathrese McKee:hierarchy. There are a few there are a few examples of pure
Kathrese McKee:egalitarian societies. But if you're interested in portraying
Kathrese McKee:something like that, look into the Kung, who live on the
Kathrese McKee:western edge of the Kalahari in Botswana, the Inuit and
Kathrese McKee:Aboriginal Australians as good examples of egalitarian
Kathrese McKee:societies, there are caste systems still in play today, and
Kathrese McKee:some of these are stronger than others. But caste system is very
Kathrese McKee:much based on who you are born to which family you are born
Kathrese McKee:into. Examples are the Varnas in India, Tamil cast din Sri Lanka,
Kathrese McKee:Somalia Higal, Moorish cast the toric, Inaden in North Africa,
Kathrese McKee:and Edo Society of Japan. So some of these are historical,
Kathrese McKee:some of them are current. But that's a good place to start, if
Kathrese McKee:you're wanting to talk about caste system, I have a little
Kathrese McKee:bit more information about bat caste systems, just the the
Kathrese McKee:features that you should be looking for in the caste system,
Kathrese McKee:you have these very these features, you will only marry
Kathrese McKee:within your assigned caste you will do the assigned jobs for
Kathrese McKee:your caste those are expectations in the caste
Kathrese McKee:system, your social status will be determined by the caste
Kathrese McKee:you're born into political exclusion of certain caste is a
Kathrese McKee:feature of the caste system and there is a lot of caste based
Kathrese McKee:discrimination in play. So this is a great place to bend and
Kathrese McKee:break society's rules create conflict, to explore themes and
Kathrese McKee:to develop plot points. So I think that the caste system is a
Kathrese McKee:great place, perhaps to have in your your story. Just think
Kathrese McKee:about that as a possibility. Next is cultural norm. Now,
Kathrese McKee:culture encompasses a customs, art, social institutions and
Kathrese McKee:achievements of a particular nation of people or other social
Kathrese McKee:groups. So often you need to know the historical context to
Kathrese McKee:we'll talk more about that in part five of this series. In
Kathrese McKee:your book society. There are customers and holidays and
Kathrese McKee:expectations about dress and roles, arts and achievements
Kathrese McKee:that are all pieces of The culture so I have three examples
Kathrese McKee:that I'd like to just go over. They just popped in my head when
Kathrese McKee:I was thinking about this and they're about cultural norms and
Kathrese McKee:breaking cultural norms. And ever after the main character is
Kathrese McKee:Danielle de barbarac, and a cake character based on Cinderella
Kathrese McKee:for anyone who has not seen the movie. In the movie Danielle
Kathrese McKee:breaks several of society's rules, she is a commoner.
Kathrese McKee:Danielle is not allowed to attend royal events such as the
Kathrese McKee:masquerade ball, she sneaks into the ball breaking the rules of
Kathrese McKee:social class and etiquette. Danielle's stepmother, who is
Kathrese McKee:part of the aristocracy forbids her from pursuing and education
Kathrese McKee:as she believes it's not appropriate for a woman. But
Kathrese McKee:Danielle secretly studies books from her father's library. To
Kathrese McKee:learn all she can Danielle step mother forces her to work as a
Kathrese McKee:servant in her own home and treats her cruelly. Despite her
Kathrese McKee:lowly status, Danielle stands up to her step mother, breaking the
Kathrese McKee:societal societal expectations for a commoner and overall
Kathrese McKee:Danielle is a strong willed and independent character who defies
Kathrese McKee:the limitations placed on her by society, her actions, trance
Kathrese McKee:challenge, the traditional gender roles and social
Kathrese McKee:hierarchies of the time. So that's one example. Another
Kathrese McKee:example is the colons from the Twilight series. The colons are
Kathrese McKee:a family of vampires and their way of life goes against the
Kathrese McKee:rules of vampire society. So you don't even have to have a real
Kathrese McKee:society to have social rules that are going to get broken.
Kathrese McKee:They choose to abstain from drinking human blood and instead
Kathrese McKee:hunt the animals. Well, you know, the koalas do not form a
Kathrese McKee:coven, but they live as a family group. They don't use their
Kathrese McKee:powers to hunt humans, so they seem strange to vampire society.
Kathrese McKee:And then they form alliances with humans, and even protect
Kathrese McKee:them a portrayal to other vampire so the colons live in a
Kathrese McKee:small isolated town, the majority of other vampires live
Kathrese McKee:close to urban environments where there's easy hunting,
Kathrese McKee:right. And then overall, basically, the colons break
Kathrese McKee:traditional rules of vampire society to live a more moral and
Kathrese McKee:ethical lifestyle than other vampires and their choices,
Kathrese McKee:bring them into conflict with other vampires who see their
Kathrese McKee:betrayal as either behavior as a betrayal or a threat to the
Kathrese McKee:established order of things. That was one example. Another
Kathrese McKee:I love is Star Trek from the:Kathrese McKee:of Star Trek, The Federation is an interstellar political entity
Kathrese McKee:comprised of lots of races and species United like by common
Kathrese McKee:set of values and beliefs, so their cultural values. Number
Kathrese McKee:one is a prime directive, right, which prohibits interference
Kathrese McKee:with the internal affairs of other civilizations and cultures
Kathrese McKee:that they run into, while they're out exploring space
Kathrese McKee:equality among all individuals, regardless of race, gender, or
Kathrese McKee:species cooperation among its members as they work for the
Kathrese McKee:common good of all. So these are their values of scientific
Kathrese McKee:progress. That's what they're all about, right? It's a pursuit
Kathrese McKee:of scientific progress, pursue knowledge and understanding of
Kathrese McKee:the universe and a supposedly peaceful resolution of conflict
Kathrese McKee:where diplomacy comes first. And then you get up against, well,
Kathrese McKee:it always seems like somebody gets killed in every episode.
Kathrese McKee:And they usually have a red shirt. But regardless, they use
Kathrese McKee:the rules of this society, to drive conflict within the
Kathrese McKee:series, and storylines and themes, so good on them.
Kathrese McKee:So the next topic that we're going to cover is form of
Kathrese McKee:government form of government. And we'll go back over to
Kathrese McKee:obsidian because I think a chart is easier to understand than
Kathrese McKee:just a collection of pictures going over to obsidian now. So
Kathrese McKee:the form of government, it's about who makes decisions and
Kathrese McKee:how they make it. So we're all familiar with monarchies. We
Kathrese McKee:grew up with those that are fairytales and they used to be a
Kathrese McKee:reality around especially around Europe and Asia. And so those
Kathrese McKee:grew into limited monarchies, where you have more advisors and
Kathrese McKee:legislative bodies that formed to kind of take over power from
Kathrese McKee:the monarchy and give more people more power to the people,
Kathrese McKee:or at least to the aristocracy, anyway, then you have
Kathrese McKee:autocracies, that, obviously like Putin in in Russia and
Kathrese McKee:leader of North Korea, and there's several that we could
Kathrese McKee:just name off, then you have theocracies where the dominant
Kathrese McKee:religion, religious leaders lead the country. Elected democracy
Kathrese McKee:is another form that we have in the world appointed. Sometimes
Kathrese McKee:leaders and governments are appointed in some form or
Kathrese McKee:fashion. And then you think, have to think about the presence
Kathrese McKee:of bureaucracy. Because often power is in the hands of people
Kathrese McKee:who are in the bureaucracy. This kind of exploded onto the scene
Kathrese McKee:after the French rebel Lucien, there was a an explosion of
Kathrese McKee:bureaucracy in that country. And it was intentional to decide
Kathrese McKee:everything from weights and measures to the postal system.
Kathrese McKee:So in some ways, it's good thing in some ways, it's not so great,
Kathrese McKee:we all hope for a meritocracy where people are promoted based
Kathrese McKee:on their knowledge and their wisdom and their skills and
Kathrese McKee:their talents. We all hope for that. But you know, we all have
Kathrese McKee:the what is it, the Peter Principle in play, where you
Kathrese McKee:rise to the level of your incompetence, anyway. And
Kathrese McKee:finally, we have plutocracy which we wish wasn't true. But
Kathrese McKee:it's probably more true than the not where people with the wealth
Kathrese McKee:have the power, they make the decisions behind the scenes, so
Kathrese McKee:plutocracy, that's what that means. So think about that, in
Kathrese McKee:the context of your story, what exists in your universe, and you
Kathrese McKee:might have two things working against each other to create
Kathrese McKee:conflict, or people trying to improve the system that exists
Kathrese McKee:to make it better against people that want the status quo. So
Kathrese McKee:this is a great area to explore for society's rules. The next
Kathrese McKee:topic is distribution of wealth, who can have wealth, and who
Kathrese McKee:cannot, this is something to really explore in your fiction.
Kathrese McKee:So distribution of wealth is about who can increase their
Kathrese McKee:wealth, and who cannot the haves and have nots, generally under
Kathrese McKee:the haves, you have the aristocracy, the merchant class
Kathrese McKee:celebrities, those who are gifted master criminals, these
Kathrese McKee:kind of the celebrities and gifted kind of buck the system,
Kathrese McKee:if you will, they managed to by hook or crook, they'll help
Kathrese McKee:develop some sort of celebrity that people think is worthy of
Kathrese McKee:wealth, the gifted, same thing, Master criminals, like pirate,
Kathrese McKee:drug lords, so forth, they just take what they want. So they're
Kathrese McKee:among the haves, whether we like it or not. And then under the
Kathrese McKee:have nots, generally, it's about ownership of land to begin with,
Kathrese McKee:that leads to all kinds of generational wealth. So we have
Kathrese McKee:the uneducated who are under the have nots, the disadvantaged in
Kathrese McKee:some way who've been discriminated against enslaved
Kathrese McKee:folk, believe it or not, even in contemporary fiction, you should
Kathrese McKee:be aware that there are more people who are enslaved today
Kathrese McKee:than at any point in history. So that's worthy of being explored,
Kathrese McKee:exploited people and renters who might also be exploited people,
Kathrese McKee:right? But renters are among the have nots, they don't own the
Kathrese McKee:space they live in. Now, they may be able to accumulate wealth
Kathrese McKee:in another way. And that's fine. You can choose to be a renter.
Kathrese McKee:I'm not nothing against renters, but I'm just saying in general
Kathrese McKee:renters are among the have nots. So there we go, that trying to
Kathrese McKee:sip on any toes. This is a great place to think about bending
Kathrese McKee:rules, breaking rules. Hey, if you're finding any value in this
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Kathrese McKee:the show now. The next topic is prevailing religion or religions
Kathrese McKee:in your world, the prevailing religion or religions in your
Kathrese McKee:world building offer a rich source of conflict for your
Kathrese McKee:story. Most conflicts over the course of human history, have
Kathrese McKee:had some overtone of religious tension biases and
Kathrese McKee:misunderstandings. Religion is a great place to delve into themes
Kathrese McKee:and conflict between characters. Humans often use religion as an
Kathrese McKee:excuse for violence and hatred. Consider the prevailing
Kathrese McKee:religions in your fictional world and see if you can mind
Kathrese McKee:their differences for plot point, themes and sources of
Kathrese McKee:conflict. And just to be clear, let's go over a few things you
Kathrese McKee:can think about few types of religion you could think about
Kathrese McKee:maybe when I mentioned prevailing religion, you thought
Kathrese McKee:of polytheistic, or a monotheistic form of religion,
Kathrese McKee:but there are others. So in polytheistic, we have a many
Kathrese McKee:Gods system as in the Romans and the Greeks, their mythology,
Kathrese McKee:with Zeus and so forth, monotheistic, theistic one god
Kathrese McKee:atheistic, no gods nothing is divine pantheistic and I put
Kathrese McKee:that (atheistic) under religious because it's hard not to,
Kathrese McKee:because you're talking about the existence of God are not.
Kathrese McKee:Pantheistic God is everything and everything is God,
Kathrese McKee:everything is divine, and Panentheistic is all in God. So
Kathrese McKee:think about differing religious systems, prevailing religions in
Kathrese McKee:your story to have a source of conflict and thought provoking
Kathrese McKee:ideas. The next area to consider are moral codes. moral codes
Kathrese McKee:seem like an extension of religious beliefs, and sometimes
Kathrese McKee:they are, but don't equate the two moral codes apply even to
Kathrese McKee:your religious folks. So let's explore how we can use this
Kathrese McKee:portion of society's rules. How can we bend moral codes or break
Kathrese McKee:them to good effect in our stories? So when we think about
Kathrese McKee:moral codes, we're talking about how do we decide between right
Kathrese McKee:and wrong and how do we promote Cooperation, good and bad
Kathrese McKee:behavior. So there are four areas of morality. There's
Kathrese McKee:religious morality, which is the one you think of first human
Kathrese McKee:relationship with their supernatural beings but God,
Kathrese McKee:morality and nature, how we treat nature around us whether
Kathrese McKee:we think it's worthy of respect or not individual morality,
Kathrese McKee:humans enter Honor Code, which can often be broken within a
Kathrese McKee:story. Somebody goes against their internal honor code, or
Kathrese McKee:they learn a new Honor Code, social morality, human to human
Kathrese McKee:relations. So under Basic morality, examples, honesty,
Kathrese McKee:respect, responsibility, kindness, caring, cooperation,
Kathrese McKee:fairness, etc. Examples of social morality might be help
Kathrese McKee:your family, help your group return favors, be brave, defer
Kathrese McKee:to superiors, divide resources, thoroughly respect others
Kathrese McKee:property. So these are all ways that are examples of social
Kathrese McKee:morality and whether or not people believe these things. So
Kathrese McKee:great area to think about when you're thinking about society's
Kathrese McKee:rules. The next area we're going to talk about is rights and
Kathrese McKee:responsibilities are about to cover a set of high in the sky
Kathrese McKee:by and by human rights, they obviously don't exist in this
Kathrese McKee:form everywhere in the world. Sometimes they exist for a
Kathrese McKee:while, and then they go away. It's a constant struggle among
Kathrese McKee:humans to have human rights. They are idealistic, I did not
Kathrese McKee:write them. Instead, I found them on the Elumis website,
Kathrese McKee:which is included in the shownotes. If you want to delve
Kathrese McKee:into that. The reason I'm going over these ideals is because
Kathrese McKee:they're terrific source for themes for your story. So under
Kathrese McKee:rights and responsibilities, comes this first idea that
Kathrese McKee:humans are born free and equal. That's a birthright another
Kathrese McKee:idealistic, right is there are no distinctions of Rights and
Kathrese McKee:Freedoms based on things like race, sex, language, religion,
Kathrese McKee:origin, property, birth, or other status. So in any one of
Kathrese McKee:these areas, you could explore a theme based on like
Kathrese McKee:discrimination based on any one of these things. The next ideal
Kathrese McKee:was everyone has the right to life, liberty and security of
Kathrese McKee:perfect person. In other words, personal safety. Another one is
Kathrese McKee:no one should be held in slavery or servitude. Well, obviously,
Kathrese McKee:we haven't achieved this one because like I said before, this
Kathrese McKee:is a an era of great enslavement, horrible
Kathrese McKee:enslavement. So it's obviously an opportunity to explore this
Kathrese McKee:area. No one should be tortured or subjected to cruel, inhuman
Kathrese McKee:or degrading treatment, or punishment. Again, obviously, we
Kathrese McKee:haven't achieved achieve this ideal. And this is a great place
Kathrese McKee:to explore no matter what kind of genre of fiction you're
Kathrese McKee:talking about, all are equal before the law and entitled to
Kathrese McKee:equal protection. So those are the ideals I wanted to just
Kathrese McKee:flash them by you. You can come back to this chapter to
Kathrese McKee:reinvestigate the last part of social society's rules are the
Kathrese McKee:laws of magic. Today we're going to skim lightly over the topic
Kathrese McKee:of laws of magic because we're going to explore this area more
Kathrese McKee:fully in the last episode. In this world building series.
Kathrese McKee:However, let's cover the basics to help you jumpstart ways to
Kathrese McKee:exploit magic systems in your book for plot points and
Kathrese McKee:conflict and to support your theme. So when you're thinking
Kathrese McKee:about the laws of magic is your magic benevolent malevolence?
Kathrese McKee:Usually there's both good and bad. There's almost always a
Kathrese McKee:dichotomy. Good and bad magic. You also have to think is magic,
Kathrese McKee:legal or illegal in your world building who has magic and how
Kathrese McKee:does it work? This is a big thing to decide. And I'm just
Kathrese McKee:gonna start you off with something I borrowed from a
Kathrese McKee:brandon sanderson. The link to the article that contained this
Kathrese McKee:is in the show notes, water Sandersons three laws of magic.
Kathrese McKee:So let's begin with a summary. The three laws are an author's
Kathrese McKee:ability to solve conflict with magic in a satisfying way is
Kathrese McKee:directly proportional to how well the reader understands said
Kathrese McKee:magic. So make your magic system crystal clear to your readers.
Kathrese McKee:They need to know kind of how it works or not all at front, but
Kathrese McKee:be able to discover it and understand it. The costs
Kathrese McKee:limitations and flaws described in your story are about are what
Kathrese McKee:make your magic interest. Interesting. So not all magic is
Kathrese McKee:going to be perfect. It's going to be an imperfect solution.
Kathrese McKee:Hopefully there's limitations to it. Also, I think there needs to
Kathrese McKee:be cost associated with using magic because that in itself
Kathrese McKee:make things more interesting. Before adding something new to
Kathrese McKee:your system. First expand on what you have have. That's
Kathrese McKee:that's by a master storyteller. Brandon Sanderson has been
Kathrese McKee:fighting long time. And I think this is great advice before you
Kathrese McKee:add anything new, expand on what you already have. All right. So
Kathrese McKee:in conclusion, leveraging the rules of society in world
Kathrese McKee:building is a powerful tool for creating a more compelling and
Kathrese McKee:engaging story, you can create conflict tension and drama. With
Kathrese McKee:characters who have conflicting beliefs or values based on their
Kathrese McKee:social status, their culture or background, you can shape
Kathrese McKee:character motivation, a character who's trying to break
Kathrese McKee:free from a restrictive society may be motivated by a desire for
Kathrese McKee:freedom and self expression. You can establish stake a character
Kathrese McKee:who breaks a major societal rule faces severe consequences and
Kathrese McKee:even possible death. So that's a great way to establish stakes in
Kathrese McKee:your story build setting, an author can create a unique and
Kathrese McKee:interesting setting. By developing a society with its
Kathrese McKee:own set of rules and customs. This will in turn influence the
Kathrese McKee:physical setting. So think about that when you're when you're
Kathrese McKee:creating your society's rules. explore themes, I'm sure
Kathrese McKee:society's rules are useful to explore themes such as
Kathrese McKee:oppression, rebellion, conformity, and so on. So that
Kathrese McKee:rounds up this episode about society's rules in world
Kathrese McKee:building. Today in Part Three, we have discuss social class
Kathrese McKee:form of government, to cultural norms, distribution of wealth,
Kathrese McKee:prevailing religion, moral codes, rights and
Kathrese McKee:responsibilities and the laws of magic. My question for you is
Kathrese McKee:which one of these areas speaks to you, and how have you used
Kathrese McKee:society's rules as important as important aspect and in your
Kathrese McKee:story? I'll leave your answers in the comments below. If you
Kathrese McKee:want to name drop a book title. That's okay too. That's all I
Kathrese McKee:have for today. Until next time, keep writing my friend. Keep